The grain $( {E}^{\prime}_{cc} \hbox{ and }{E}^{\prime}_{ca}) $ and bulk (E mm and Emt) enhancement factors should be raised to a power of 2/(n + 1) throughout, so that
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to be consistent with the enhancement-factor definition (11) for n ≠ 1. Only if the orientation-independent fluidity (5) is used instead of (2) do the equations stand correctly in the original paper for n ≠ 1.
The conclusions of the original paper are unaffected by this correction, but the best-fit grain enhancements factors, needed to reproduce bulk behaviour for n′ = 3, are different. Figure 1 shows the revised version of Figure 3 (panel a is unchanged) where ${E}^{\prime}_{ca} = 10^4$ is found to best fit bulk behaviour, as opposed to
${E}^{\prime}_{ca} = 10^2$ in the original paper.
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Figure 1. Revised Figure 3.